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Sunday, January 17, 2016

Intro-Vert-I-Go


Always been that other world, that other girl
Without mirrors, I practice reflected gaze, looking out, away.
Dull detail and veiled drama doubled back,
Within, within, that other world, mine to ply,
With mimed reaction to every mindful observation.



Thanks to Magpie Tales for the photo prompt.

10 comments:

  1. GailJanuary 18, 2016 at 11:49 AM

    Well penned.

    Thanks for visiting.

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  2. C. SandlinJanuary 18, 2016 at 2:22 PM

    Perfect title & I could almost hear a melody behind the words.

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  3. MichaelJanuary 18, 2016 at 5:35 PM

    Auto piloted reactions while internal discussions are held filibuster.

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  4. KutamunJanuary 18, 2016 at 10:34 PM

    Some sort of sensual doppelganger , mimetic poesis

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  5. HelenJanuary 19, 2016 at 1:09 PM

    The title of your poem is great ~~ what follow is just as great!

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  6. DeepaJanuary 20, 2016 at 4:46 AM

    Lovely read

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  7. NoirfifreJanuary 20, 2016 at 9:21 AM

    That world (play on title)makes you observe because you are slow to speak and quick to watch.A beautiful thing in a reflected gaze.

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  8. Bekkie SanchezJanuary 20, 2016 at 1:41 PM

    I enjoyed this! I was always the other girl too great observation.

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  9. TruedessaJanuary 20, 2016 at 6:51 PM

    Interesting title...perhaps she is more comfortable in her own world.

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  10. Tess KincaidJanuary 22, 2016 at 8:01 AM

    Nice pairing of words...

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