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Monday, September 28, 2015

"Pwmd"






Glass half-full
Focus the moment
The center of truth
Own it
Straw wrapper folded
Into a zigzag pattern
Smoothed out after
Word-for-word
rhubarb chatter
Queried and qwerty’d
into matter
Of fact-checked impact
Shattered open

For Magpie Tales 287 
 

7 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanSeptember 28, 2015 at 4:48 AM

    The last line is like a dramatic answer to the first line. Dynamic poem.

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  2. LeoviSeptember 28, 2015 at 6:15 AM

    Yes, the true center is the face of the girl!
    Limbo Delirium
    Black & White Abstracts

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  3. brudbergSeptember 28, 2015 at 7:05 AM

    Queried and qwerty’d what a wonderful expression.. also rhubarb chatter.. great piece

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  4. BerowneSeptember 28, 2015 at 8:32 AM

    Beautifully qwerty'd; well done.

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  5. KutamunSeptember 29, 2015 at 8:39 AM

    Through a glass , thoroughly

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  6. 21 WitsSeptember 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM

    She shall succeed!

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  7. MargaretSeptember 30, 2015 at 12:06 AM

    rhubarb chatter - rather a "tart" response... I like that

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